Ok, I've made a few tweaks here and there, as well as added a few details. Mostly I changed exactly how the ending unfolds. I think this version is a little stronger in it's direction, hopefully for the better. Overall I wasn't too concerned over acting and reactions, these are things I will work out in later stages.
Thanks again to all who left comments and suggestions on the last reel. I took everything into consideration and in many cases tried them out, but this is the version I thought worked best in the end.
Once again, the password is "trueblue".
EDIT: Please omit the fact that Rose's empty glass is missing after the dream sequence.